A sweet poem! :) I enjoyed the vivid imagery here, and whilst I wasn’t a fan of the ‘secret messages dangling upon tongues’ (I don’t think dangling gives the image of snowflakes?) I like the innocence you portray here, and I would’ve liked to have seen even more of this lovely vocabulary!

The title “When a Snow Flake Melts” to me is like showing inner-self, which is connected to the end of the poem “awakening the inner child”. It is like revealing what’s hidden within the snow flake.

Just beautiful!!

Absolutely beautiful

Beautiful, vivid imagery.. perfection... Milly x

Andrea, your pieces are so beautiful. I too used to catch snowflakes on my tongue as a child. It brought me back to those days. You carry so much inside you, I know it weighs heavy on your heart. Like that falling snow, let it fall, ease your burden...Hugs you-

Lovely like yourself, dear friend! <3

Beautiful imaginary, Andrea.
Loved it.
I enjoyed reading it with my inner child.

An imagery explosion, loved this Andrea