by CJ Maleney Dec 17, 2018
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
When you have known true fear, |
by Cam M
Quite amusing, and rather insightful. I find your poetry quite satisfying to read. Thank you. |
by CJ Maleney
Thank you. Chuffed you liked it |
Oh wow. So glad to see this nominated. All the very best |
by CJ Maleney
Thank you. |
by Brenda
Craig, fascinating write. A lot to ponder there and oh so true! People will never understand that the things they do will always have some sort of consequence. Well said Sir! |
by CJ Maleney
Thanks Bren. |
by D.
You force a lot of rhyme here, and it’s kind of unfortunate because I like the idea, and the energy behind it. I mean, I’m not anti-rhyme, but the restructuring of sentence formation is distracting if it’s done a lot? Maybe it’s a style thing I need to get used to lol. The message is a positive one, and something we can all adhere to. I like a lot about this poem, despite my comments. Maybe I need to hear it spoken to appreciate it more. |
by CJ Maleney
I totally understand where you are coming from. |