Comments : Seasonal Sneezer

  • 6 years ago

    by Chelo

    Ah those people you gotta love and hate them. They are sick and say they are okay because they don't let a cold stop them from enjoying family company which is admirable but also not a good idea for those who don't want to get sick. Great poem!

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      I know... I was in a shop the other day when the shop assistant at the checkout sneezed into her hands then proceeded to put her hands all over the shopping as she scanned the items. It was really gross and partly what inspired this poem lol. Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by ddavidd

    delightful!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You put a smile on my face Milly. Hugs to you

  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was a funny write and I can totally relate! Trying to stop a sneeze though makes me only sneeze harder. Oh I know how many of us during this holiday season are wary of any chance of germs and getting a cold.

  • 5 years ago

    by Darren

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    It is not often that you find a poem nominated from the fun and humour section of the site. The reason is probably because we all avoid that part like the plague. Comedy is a difficult skill to master, what you may find funny may fall flat elsewhere. Milly has taken a simple subject and written a very funny piece. In fact, I would consider it a classic, I can easily see this being read out at elementary schools. worthy of an HM at least 4 points

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Oh, I just hate 'those' people who sneeze into the air. It's just rude, unecessary and inconsiderate. Greater
    You have made light of this sensitive topic, which is probably best. XX