Daniel, I really like how you write. It's crazy how some of the habits we have and what memories they bring.

Strong visuals and heart wrenching emotional portrayal of the guilt one feels when the one you love has died yet you still survive. A really great poem. Happy New year. Milly x

A very personal piece Daniel, with much imagery for one to sink into. So well written about how life is and how it can affect us.

Nicely done, M :)

great poem Daniel, i love your writing style, very stripped back and to the point. Every word earns its spot in your poem. As for the first two parts of you poem? I have managed to kick them both into touch a few years back.

Love all of your new pieces. I feel like they all flow wonderfully and all are coming from similar emotions. Can't wait to keep reading more. I specifically like how this one each action is broken into it's own part but all of it blends together perfectly

I adore this piece, it has a strong message and the flow was just perfect especially with the closing line. The way you weaved thru the physical and emotional aspect was great. It was a pleasure reading it and glad that you joined this site. :-)

Really liked reading this it really flows well together nice write thanks for sharing