Masque

by D.   Jan 1, 2019


You wear fangs
to kiss me,
to smile whilst
we do bad
things;

without us
you are but
a murmur
with a shy
laugh.

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  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Nice write Daniel, reminds me of a drink of mine ;)
    Short and great description
    M :)

  • 5 years ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    So much in this poem, with so little. Incredible free verse.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    There is something instantly pleasing about opening a page and seeing a poem delicately formatted and so succinct in content, as Maple alludes to. Your work is always imaginative and is a cut above the vast majority of free verse on this site.
    Well done and all the best,
    Ben

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Well this has a depth and beauty that weighs heavy in each line, I love it!

    The elegance of a small poem that holds says more than words can express is what I like in a poem.

    The dark side of beauty, enhanced with a lady like glow, just beautiful!

    • 5 years ago

      by D.

      Thank you both. Your comments put a huge smile on my face! It means a lot. :)

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