by Maher Jan 2, 2019
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The sky, the moon |
by Mr. Darcy
Mather, I could hear the music see the sea waves delivering the salt into those wounds on your exposed raw heart. |
by Maher
Thanks my man, glad you liked it. Stay safe :) |
by Brenda
Maher, always wonderful to read your pieces. This is chilling to think of how an ended relationship can be, cold, hard, and hurtful. Well done- |
by Maher
Thanks Brenda, it certainly is a heavy thought. Glad you enjoyed it :) |
That last stanza not only summed up the emotion for me. "Into the cold that screwed me", chills. |
by Maher
Thanks for reading. Glad you like it and to know the ending works :) |
Beautifully written. Each line pulsed with emotion. Vividly sound. |
by Maher
Thanks Victoria, glad you found it so :) |
Excellent as always SC.. |
by Maher
Thanks USB, glad you like it :) |