This is beautiful. Melancholy and beautiful.

Love this Tanya x

Tanya,
a great piece of writing, with so much imagery, in a world wonderful imagination
Nice work, M :)x

Ugh, I love your poetry! And I mean that "ugh" as a content sigh :)

This reads to me like something I would find at the end of a novel, this excerpt, speaking of loss but of how the earth continues providing others and nurturing. I felt a melancholy tone yet also a gentle acceptance that us "being gone" is not a terrifying concept but a cycle. That the Earth will still be cared for. That hopefully, we will find a place of rest after we have taken our final breath.

There's longing and an awareness in this piece, a subtle thought perhaps that we will return to earth peacefully, or that we will be remembered.

I don't know where to write a thank you for the win. Humbled, with all the good writers out there to be acknowledged. Much gratitude.

Ive only just had a chance to read this... it is steeped in emotion and just beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your win...Milly x