Dumbfounded

by Ocean Chant   Jan 18, 2019


Following the seemingly irreversible strangled heart,
It’s not the fear of losing yourself that haunts
But the fear of that someone losing you.
I am taken aback.
How bewildering the heaviness lingering in one’s love.

    report violation
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  • 5 years ago

    by D.

    The first line is a little too wordy but I enjoyed the meaning of this. It’s almost like a quote, a musing. Well written :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Ocean Chant

      Thank you for the feedback, noted :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Short but succinct. Thought-provoking words.

    Take care

    • 5 years ago

      by Ocean Chant

      Thank you for the opinion Ben :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Maher

    A very heavy piece. The one you write of must miss you very much and I know that feeling all too well. Thanks for sharing your work with us all and please keep writing :)

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