Comments : My Daughter, My Sunshine

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    What a sweet romantic tribute. Everyone could do with a bit of sunshine like that in their lives. Nice rhyming to. Best wishes Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Wow what a fluctuation of mood from one poem to the other. This attests to how vibrant you are. Though remember if this is a new poem, the fluctuation aspect could be a little alarming, because you are going to sway with the same force, or even higher back, due to fluctuation nature. So the best thing your silver haired friend would do if he was in your silver shoes, is to calm down the emotions. Healing, in serious cases take time. Keep everything in neutral gear as much as you could for the time being. All these said, this poem shows some poetical strength that you should be proud of.
    With love
    Your new friend who keep on advising where he should not.

    • 5 years ago

      by Stephanie

      Wow, thank you so much. I appreciate your input, always. This poem is about my seven year old daughter. She is my sunshine each and every day. Her and my son are what’s keeping me pressing on in this very trying time in my life. When I feel like it’s just too hard to handle I look to them. They are both my rock, and I will forever be thankful to be their mom.

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Children are the very best of us. They hold our dreams within them. It is little wonder we love our 'mini me's'
    This tribute written in easy to read rhyming couplets is a perfect way to give open praise to your daughter. It is clear you both share love for each other. A lasting love is the best kind there is.
    Super write.