by stormingdance (Lessa) Jan 26, 2019
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Darkness |
A serene view of drowning gives a more peaceful way of dying. An initial glimmer of hope that finally succumbs and gives into the inevitability of it. Milly x |
by Star
This has a deep meaning, in my opinion. The cinquain style fits the poem content really well. The idea, the thought, the feeling keeps expanding, and then night falls; wrapping it beautifully. |