Closer to spring (syntuit)

Like it Michael, it tells much with few lines, reminds me of the Haiku style.
added to my Favorites.

Lovely, simple and pure!

So pretty Michael. Something to look forward to...Michigan is not close to spring.

I really like the words you've used. They really do help me see the coming of Spring.
My only critique of this would be:

I am fairly sure Haiku's don't have similes or metaphors. Using Larry's cousin form, a 'syntuit' would allow this.
Anyway, in my cloudy eyes, it's a good visual piece.

Beautiful!!!