by Maple Tree Feb 11, 2019
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Upon a night so cold and dreary |
by Mr. Darcy
Pain of yours you share with us |
by D.
There’s a lot of pain here, and you express it touchingly as always . I find ‘her cancer pain’ a little off, though? Maybe cancer pains is better? I don’t know. You pen sadness so well, Andrea. |
Very few words other than I feel the strength, sorrow and aches in which your soul shares here <3 |
by Star
The rhyming brings warmth to this piece, cuddling the sadness it holds. <3 |
Beautiful imagery and great rhyming. Loved this. Much Love Milly x |