Comments : Love and Time Wait for Nothing

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    A lovely, yet stark write here, Milly. Love's journey can be harsh and strip off 'loves golden luster' and leave a nasty taste in one's mouth. Xx

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Mr Darcy, its not my normal style (I prefer to write more humorous prose) but sometimes much darker pieces find their way out. :) xx

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Love is so strong it hurts and it can go from sweet to bitter. Hugs to you Milly and thank you for sharing

  • 5 years ago

    by D.

    You speak of the difficulties and tribulations of love in a melancholic and evocative way. The form and rhythm are consistent, and the imagery in the second and fourth are particularly lovely. Well penned :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Daniel. Really glad you liked it. Its not my normal style so much harder to do. Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    A fabulous and insightful piece that flows beautifully. I love your language here Milly and I'm glad to see it nominated :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Very well written with a neat abab rhyme scheme which isn't all that easy to do.

    Take care, Milly.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Haven't read such a beautiful poem in a long time. Truly deserves front page win this week.

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thankyou Ya-Na for your lovely comment really glad you liked it. Best wishes Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Great write Milly, love may be lost for a period of time, but, true love never fails, it cannot, for, it is from the Divine.

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Ken for your lovely comments :) xx

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats Milly

  • 5 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Congrats on your win Milly, I loved it!

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Congratulations on your win. X

  • 5 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    Definitely put a dent in my armour, we'll penned.

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thankyou for all the congratulations and lovely comments. It was a lovely surprise to win xx

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is absolutely beautiful and so true Milly. Apologies I missed it but a well deserved win xx

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thanks Em, really glad you liked it. It was a lovely surprise to win it rarely happens :) xx

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Nicely penned and true..congrats on
    the win!

  • 5 years ago

    by Muhammad Amiruddeen

    This is a wonderful piece.

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Muhammad. Glad you liked it. Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    this is nice poem

  • 5 years ago

    by Zia Mikaela

    I love this!