by Milly Hayward Feb 18, 2019
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
When I was just a child |
I love the pantameter I once heard playing tennis without a net!That's how the non rythemic poems remind me of. Beautifully put! |
by Chelo
This piece is incredible! Great job Milly. "Sing to your own life's tune". I really like that phrase. |
Thanks Chelo, I am so happy to hear that you liked it. I do try and write uplifting poetry although from time to time it goes the opposite way. Take care and thank you for taking the time to comment. Best wishes Milly x |
I think you nailed this poem you have to make yourself happy in life and be true to yourself because at the end of the day it is all you got yes you have friends and family and support but truly who hasn’t felt alone in a crowded room? I think this poem was written beautifully. Good work |
Thanks Kerry, really glad you liked it. Best wishes Milly x |
different is always lonely. good reminder |
Thank you :) |
by Mr. Darcy
Embracing ones true self and those special people around you is certainly worthy of note. I think today's generation struggle more with peer pressure. I hope your inspirational poem helps. |
Thank you Mr Darcy, I wrote it to be inspirational. There is far too much peer pressure on young people particularly with the social media. Take care Milly x |