Comments : You Call It Sin

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Who is to judge what one person does? A lot of food for thought in this write. Well done-

  • 5 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is a truly brave write

    some avoid tackling what may be considered by many as taboo.

    Yet how many hurts are conveyed in words of poetry. How many are disguised and written in a metaphorical context.

    I guess what you have written may not sit well with many but thats down to them.

    Respect

    Craig

    • 5 years ago

      by DarkNDangerous

      Thank you Craig. That means a lot. I agree, not many people would like this, but that was kind of the point. It was written for those people and show to people like me they are not alone.

  • 5 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    This speaks volumes in more ways than one. To live for yourself and not for others. To have your own belief of what life is instead of following the masses. That feeling of being judged because others choose not to understand, when others choose not to accept what is normal for you. The poem was as smooth as silk but carried a lot of pain and emotion behind each stanza. A poem that many can relate to. This was masterfully written in my opinion. Good job