I like the point you are trying to make here, though I am curious as to why you've chosen this format. It seems less productive and effective than had you added some spice via stanza or line breaks. That aside though, I enjoy this piece. Thank you for sharing.

I love the message of this as it reminded me of the small things we can do in our daily life that will have a greater impact. We don't have to "show" our worth or our legacy with great gestures. It's in the simple, pure and unexpected moments where we can affect someone's life. After all, we can't know or predict the future. We can only take those little steps and work toward our goals as life carries us along.