Ooh

Not normally a fan of short pieces but this is powerful and twisty. Much can be read into it. All probably wrong but a person can twist this to fit their particular circumstance

Craig

The way you assembled under and above chiminny I see that you are a rising star, ( no pun intended)
Don't get me wrong, You did not deliver, as strong as you started, (in my humble opinion) but you are a contender, believe me I see.
Star is right name for you, A rising one.

Great to see this nominated. Delicately formatted and written.

A short piece but powerful and open to interpretation. Milly x

Three delicate musings that can belong together and apart. There’s a poignancy here that I really enjoy. I’m a huge fan of small pieces of poetry - it’s clear you have a talent for it. :)