Comments : A Crab in my Sandwich

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I do like a crab sandwich - bloody pricey though, aren't they?
    This is well rhymed and very witty, like so much of your best poetry, Milly.

    All the very best as ever,
    Ben

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thanks Ben :) I actually find crabs creepy lol. Much love Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    There is a lot of comedy in crabs:
    the way they walk
    beady eyes
    ... and that, smell of crab lol

    I liked this comedy write, using rhyming quatrains to great effect.
    Thanks for the chuckle X

  • 5 years ago

    by Star

    I may be the first to say this, but only reading the title made me feel hungry!!! This also made me feel good, please always share this type of poetry :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I have to say it put a huge smile on my fave and I love your sense of humor. Hugs to you Milly

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thanks Dagmar, glad to make you smile :) much love Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by Zia Mikaela

    This is so cute! This brightened up my day!

  • 5 years ago

    by Imperfection

    It made me laugh out loud thanks for sharing

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Thank you glad you liked it. I have been trying my hand at humour so its nice to hear that its making people laugh:) xx