I love the whole layout of this poem, how you seem to drag the reader into the next scene with a rhyming word, very clever of you.

I also loved the word choice and, although it was a short poem it was very, very classy IMO. I will definitely be back to nominate this one when it's possible....

I liked this a lot. Smoothly written and history all in one complete package. Well done-

Very clever play between the last/first words of each stanza. I like what you've done.