A missing title...

by Star   Mar 4, 2019


They called me a psychopath,
but you looked into my eyes
not fearing what I held inside
or even what my red tears
looked like...

Where.... have you been?
.
.
.
you asked

and I couldn’t answer,
for I have feared that you
would also leave me

But you
opened my
chest, took my
heart out, and painted it
.
.
.
white.

You carefully
placed it tilted right,
and sutured me with
yellow stitches.

    report violation
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  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    The imagery in this is dark and fascinating all at once!

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you Ben :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    An interesting read where you open yourself to the other
    and place your precious heart in love's hand. I liked the format
    of this write and the way it flowed...well penned.

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you Meena :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Loved the way this flowed and how you opened your heart to be fixed.

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by D.

    Adored the ending to this, Star. I feel there’s an innocence here, and a desperation for understanding and acceptance.

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you both, glad you liked the ending Daniel :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Kerry Gardiner

    “and I couldn’t answer,
    for I have feared that you
    would also leave me”

    This message is very revealing in terms of the soul and it’s search to trust and love. I enjoyed the raw emotion and feeling coming out through your word choice wonderful work

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