Comments : Ocean

  • 5 years ago

    by Kerry Gardiner

    So I really enjoyed your poem today. Very nice way to get your feelings across in a positive way love the ending

    “Some days I don't know how to swim.
    I'm afraid they will engulf me
    But today they didn't win.”

    Great work.

    Kerry

  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Anxiety attacks are truly terrifying. I used to have them before my retail job and it certainly can be debilitating. I hope writing these emotions, raw and honest, helped in some way. Glad to hear the thoughts didn't fully sink you, they didn't win this time.