by Aegis Mar 8, 2019
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
How many more |
Love this, the influence of the moon, the careful placement of these words. For some reason, "tilt" just sounds so soft and delicate in this. And I liked the effect of placing "I" on its own line. Once again, you prove you can say a great deal with few words :) |
by Aegis
You nailed it really.. Tilt was the softest whisper of a word in the entire piece. Thank you for picking up what I was putting down^_^ |
by Mr. Darcy
Nice play on words in this well presented piece. |
by Aegis
^_^ |