I would love to have nominated this one but Naaz beat me to it...doesn't matter as long as it's out there for the judges to read. Can I just say however, I was quite enchanted with the whole verse and got caught up in it entirely until this line

Life ain't no fairy-tale;

^^^

ain't just didn't seem to fit with the rest of the language used in your poem so...I can only suggest you have another look at this line??

This is a very busy poem, but in a good way. As Hellon said, a very enchanting poem! I don’t feel the last 3 lines particularly add anything interesting to the poem, as they detract from the feeling of the rest of the poem, like an afterthought. Other than that, loved it :)

Fully deserved win. Well done!

Blimey... straight to my favourites it's like a full head of images with the simplicity of the final stranza just goes straight to the point and finishes very strongly in my opinion.

Worth winner.

Beautiful Sg, and many congratulations on your win, M :)