by D. Mar 16, 2019
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Candlelit hearth |
This is just a stunning write that I loved from start to finish. Stunningly beautiful! |
by Meena Krish
From the first stanza itself I was put into a Japanese setting. So ghostly, mysterious and fascinatingly captured my imagination..lived it! |
by Mr. Darcy
Like the bitter wind, your writing takes my breath away. As for your foot fetish, leave them wanting to know more. . . |
by D.
Hahaha, I tried to shoe horn my fetish in subtly. Trying to keep you on your toes. Next time I’ll leave a foot note. Sorry about the puns ;) |
by Star
What are you doing Daniel? You keep writing those mesmerizing poems, and I cant wait to read more; I really hope there is more :) |
by D.
There will be more. I’m very glad you’re enjoying them! :) |
The only word I can use to describe how I felt after reading this is "entranced". Just like with your previous poems, I love the lore, the depth of it and how you put a real voice to this story. This was just as mesmerizing especially how you noted she can show mercy. |
by D.
Thank you MA! I’m trying to spend a great deal of time on these so I’m happy it comes through. :) |