All I Know

by AnnaCG   Mar 20, 2019


Spring crawls slowly forward,
Chasing away cold winter nights.
But all I can see is how you look at me,
Underneath these city lights.

Tangled up within this moment,
I'm somewhere lost in thought.
But all I can feel is something so real,
It must be worth a shot.

Fire away I'm an easy target,
Though I'll admit I'm terrified.
But all I can do is hope that it's true,
And push my fears aside.

As my heart beat starts to quicken,
Time does as well it seems.
But all I know by far is where we are,
Is the same as in my dreams.

Anna CG 2019

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  • 3 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Such a sweet poem.
    The overwhelming sense of yearning for love so new is a driving force in this piece.
    I liked how much feeling you were able to put into each word and how each stanza built it stronger.
    The emotion is really relatable and easy to fill as I read each word, line, and stanza.
    You captured the feelings of love, fear, and excitement so well.
    I also love the way the first few lines describe the feelings of nature and love and how tied they are in a sense of love brightening up the world and making it feel like seasons change from winter to summer.
    Lovely write.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Really well rhymed throughout. A pleasure to read.

  • 5 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Really enjoyed this piece and it didn't seem at all forced which is wonderful.
    The first stranza is my favourite gave me a real image just by the words "city lights.

    One bit didn't sound right to me but I think I will put that down to my strong British accent lol

    Thought and shot to me didn't read well to me it made me pause,but like I said I believe it's most likely my accent.

    Well penned.

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