by CRAFTY KEN Mar 23, 2019
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Hi, I’m you’re hot friend, the Sun! |
by Michael
Really enjoyed this piece from you Ken, great write fella, M :) |
by CRAFTY KEN
Thanks so much Michael, I love writing those metaphors. |
by Dark Secrets
This poem is playful, and has a nice rhythm to it. There are two words that I don't feel fit in though, |
by CRAFTY KEN
Hey! Good to hear from you! When I penned those two words, I had in mind when Jesus took his Disciple's up a high mountain, and was transfigured, and, he shown brighter than the Sun. Moses and Elijah (The Law & the Prophet), when the totally awe-struck Disciples saw this, they wanted to build Shrines for Moses and Elijah, but, a voice from Heaven spoke saying; This is my beloved Son, listen to him! Always appreciate your professional critique, missed you! |