Comments : Reborn II

  • 5 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Quite enchanting Star
    I bet This is one of your earlier poems that you rearranged or edited somehow. Just a hunch, sorry for the intrusion of my guesses.

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Yes!!! it needed some tweaking as well :) Thank you Bob!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I like the imagery in this poem and the positive vibe it has. The flow and rhythm of the poem is well thought out. Great write :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautiful little poem this is.

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you so much Dark Secrets and Ben :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    *nominated

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Omg thank you!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by D.

    You are growing in confidence and it’s really pleasant to see. Such a lovely command over language here. Gorgeous writing. :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      You mean with poetry? Thank you so much :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Beautiful and glad to see it nominated

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    This really is lovely. I just love how this flows.

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you so much ladies ^_^