by Ben Pickard
This has my final nomination and deserves the front page, in my opinion. Fluent rhyming throughout. The only suggestion I would make, Michael, "Your heart was wrapped in strands OF gold". I think without the 'of' it just drops a beat there (to me anyway). |
by Michael
Thank you Ben, most appreciated fella... and yes doh forgot the 'of' thanks for pointing this out :) |
by Brenda
Oh Michael, what a beautiful piece! |
by Michael
Thank you Miss Brenda :)x |
by Meena Krish
This has been written so sentimentally beautiful and the rhymes |
by Michael
Thank you Meena :)x |
Omg Michael this is absolutely beautiful. Add to my favorite. Hugs to you |
by Michael
Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x |
by Em (marmite)
Added to faves that is all. |
by Sunshine
Oh my god. This broke my heart, and really impressed me. The style reminded me of an old favourite poem - Music I Heard by Conrad Aiken, (look it up). The structure, the flow, the word choice and sentiments, it's all well combined and touches the reader's heart. Thank you for sharing, I hope it goes to the front page! |
by Ya----Na
I know times pass, and life goes on |