Castle in the sunset

by Chenoa   Mar 28, 2019


Sun sinks into ocean,
Rays crash upon the sand,
Waves stretch to reach the shore,
Then quickly run away from land.
Our setting star shines a path
Across the water's sky,
It glistens on this liquid,
To cross it, so few try.
The clouds create a castle,
With towers stretching high,
Shadows deepen stairways,
And room decor is dyed.
A mote surrounds this palace,
With soldiers made of sun,
A fiery red hot dragon,
To protect the special one.
A temple risen out of nowhere,
But it won't be there for long,
Pinks and oranges fade to purples,
Now soon it will be gone.
And with a flash of green,
All residents must reside,
Back to where they came from,
Castle sinks to tide.

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  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This poem read to me like a deep inhale then exhale. I smiled at "soldiers made of sun" and the paradise yet adventure you have laid out here for the reader. Usually I am not a fan of each line being capitalized and a comma after each line, as sometimes it is not needed if a line flows naturally into the next, but I didn't feel it that distracting with this poem. There's almost an innocence and a calming flow.

    Oh, and welcome to PnQ! Hope to read more of your work :)

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