by Larry Chamberlin Apr 22, 2019
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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by Ben Pickard
Larry, this is excellent. I have read this three times and what struck me primarily was how neatly you have blended the narrative with rhyme and how fluently each line blends in to the next. But also, you paint some lovely images with your words and I had to giggle when I reached the end. A charming poem. |