by Meme Apr 23, 2019
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Disappointment can be lethal |
its like you've never stopped I love the idea behind this. |
by Sunshine
What a return poem. Welcome back on board. No heart should be sentenced for life. It is designed in a way to defy all weathers and all storms. Trust me, it's mightier than any ship. Cracks won't make it sink. Keep it up. I loved this poem and missed your work. |
by Shruti
I guess I haven't commented before, but I love your poems and I'm so happy to see another poem after so long. There is a soft and longing tone in your poems which I love so much. |
Never! Pick the lock, escape with the laundry! |
I felt a heaviness in this piece and a sort of oppression of the heart. That you feel confined and whether that be situational, with a person, or in your thoughts... this poem spoke of vulnerabilities and a morose feeling that your heart keeps getting disappointed and you can't change that. |