by Some Random Human Apr 25, 2019
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Everything is missing, |
enjoyed reading this piece. i like how your poems always have a solid rhythm going on. while reading, i could easily imagine it being sung. the ending slayed me. well-worth the nomination. |
Thank you, I always have a song in mind when I write. |
by CJ Maleney
I really. Liked this. It's a very strong write with a killer of an ending. |
Thanks! |
by Em (marmite)
I imagine you singing this. Yes, I know it's more a song but I can feel the rhythm, glad to see it nominated. <3 |
Imagine someone else singing it and it might be good! |