I miss you

by Dagmar Wilson   May 5, 2019


I am walking along the beach
cold foam is hitting my feet
it's a lonely night for me,
the moon is reflecting on gallons of water.

A salty breeze is gliding down my skin
this ribbon in my hair I am ready to set it free,
I miss you my sweet friend.

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  • 5 years ago

    by Oluwaseye Olayode Taiwo

    Great poem

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Dagmar, this may well be my favourite from you.

    All the very best as ever.

    • 5 years ago

      by Dagmar Wilson

      Thank you Ben I have to agree. All the very best to you

  • 5 years ago

    by Tanya Southey

    Gorgeous x

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    As the sea breeze plucked
    your ribbon from my fingers

    my lonely tears fell

  • 5 years ago

    by Star

    There is something soft about this that coexists with the sadness of missing a loved one...

    “this ribbon in my hair I am ready to set it free”
    ^
    I love this part, it feels like being ready to let go, but the absence of the person is still hanging to you..

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