Comments : At night

  • 5 years ago

    by Robert Long

    Very lovely poem and magnificent rhyming.
    I was able to follow along the entire time good job ^^

    -Robert

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Robert for your comments and reading, M

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A beautiful romantic spell indeed. There is something quite magical about water whether it be the sea or a lake. Milly x

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly, and your nomination, much appreciated, M :)x

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nice poem, Michael. As for those watery lips, you'll need a tissue for that condition.

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Mr D, kitchen roll will suffice ;)

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    When it comes to the ocean or a lake it's like a different world. The air, the atmosphere water certainly can play magic. Add to my favorite. Hugs to you

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x

  • 5 years ago

    by P o e m e l o

    Wow. so Lovely

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Poemelo :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Skyfire

    I love poems like this that are so rich with senses. Very nice!

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Skyfire