Comments : Heart Breaker

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I couldn't help but start humming Mariah Carey's 'Heartbreaker' by the end of this one!
    Anyway, well written.

    Take care

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Sometime the very nature of the attraction is the 'cant have' element. Still the moth is attracted to the flame that will destroy it. A nice character observational piece. Milly x