First of all, congratulation!! I hope you have a happy life together!!
And in my opinion, the simplest feelings can turn into poems as beautiful as deep ones. The fact that it was hard to write, means it is special. So no matter what is written, the poem will always beautiful, don’t doubt that!!

I'm a huge romantic and loved this specially the fact you wrote it for your wife to be just melted my heart and had to nominate :) Milly x

Tony, this is lovely. It sent such warmth through me as I can entirely relate to the content. My wife and I have been together since we were kids (20 years now) and I feel the same for her now as I did then - more, in fact.
May you have many, many happy years together and a wonderful wedding day; I'll be thinking of you.

All the very best as ever,

Ben

So much love in this. Congratulations on your upcoming wedding. There is nothing better than finding that one, the one who makes your heart sing. Heres to a lifetime of happiness!

This is so beautiful , I am so glad you have an angel in your life and in your writing!

The whole poem is beautiful and I like how it is simple and something that love should always be, yet you still put your personal thoughts on it and make it yours. I love the relation of being a candle that never blows out - that shows how much trust you have in this love and passion for eternity together.

What a beautiful gift to give to her!

Take care