Comments : who would have wondered?

  • 5 years ago

    by Star

    Ok this is supposes to be fun, but what came to my mind is pulling out stitches from an eye after a surgery.
    But I like it especially the ending, it was a fun write indeed!!

    • 5 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      I'm like a stick if rock, 'fun' runs through my core.
      Thanks for commenting.

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I could feel your pain and discomfort with this. So glad it turned out to be an eyelash my imagination was working over time in entirely a gory direction in the first two stanzas such a relief to read a nicely penned reprieve in the last :) much love Milly xx

    • 5 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      We all need a little misdirection once in awhile. I'm glad you appreciated it. Xx

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Some clever rhyming here, Michael. Using the same rhyming sounds over numerous lines is never easy and you do it really well here.

    • 5 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      I'm find writing, non-rhyming poetry the hardest of all. We tune into the beat, do we not?
      Thanks for reading and commenting, Ben.

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Clever Michael! I enjoyed the story...

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    You have threaded this piece very well Mr D ;)
    those little eyelashes can be irritable blighters! M