Comments : Dodging Potholes

  • 5 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Interesting poem Mills. Love the concept and it's subject matter.

    Craig x

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Love this, Maple. The tight formatting and the centering of it really works well and there is a bright ray of hope in this, especially at the end.

    Take care