I read this piece several times and realised that the reader has to look quite deeply into the words to really get to the crux of what is being said. The burn marks are not literal but a metaphor for words spoken with passion and love. A passionate portrayal of fiery love for a woman who cries not with pain but with a mixture happiness and the rising of passion in her in response to the passion given from him.

A complex but fascinating write.

A very interesting write of love worded passionately with
a different view. I had to read it a few times and found there
is a deeper feeling running under...nicely penned!