So glad to see you right again and certainly add to my favorite. Nominated. Hugs to you

Awww, thank you so much Dagmar! Hugs you-

Brenda, you've written and set this out so carefully that each word is perfect. The cosmos is something I often stare at and lose myself in deep contemplation. Each star a promise, each star a dream come true. When comparing our star to our own earthly lights it is easy to see our lesser light. We can of course be as bright, but we humans have that unwritten promise of a dream come true in our hands. It's up to us to shine and show how we can truly shine.

Thanks, Brenda. This is my favourite write of yours and ifi may, I'll keep this little star in my pocket. Xx

A beautiful piece lady Brenda, nice to see some of your work again,much love, M:)x

Brenda a really lovely piece. I used to lay on the cliff tops with my brothers staring at the starlit sky discussing the world and the Universe and it was so much more vivid in those days so I can completely relate to this.

Regarding the last two stanza's I think that you have already become that shining star and will continue to shine on. Your kindness, positive outlook and caring nature spreads warmth and light with every kind thought and deed. Glad to see this nominated. Much love Milly x

I like this Brenda
If I'm reading it correctly your comparing the night sky to aspects of your self and how no matter how hard you try to shine some people just don't see you in the haze of everyday life x

I have slept on a mountainside in Snowdonia with nothing but a sleeping bag and the night sky covering me. There was not a light to be seen from a town or vehicle and not a noise to be heard apart from a little stream trickling nearby. Apart from learning how cold you can be at times like those, I truly did learn the insignificance of all the petty things in our lives and just how significant all the important things were. My point is, I get this write and love it.

Take care

So much can be lost in a city life, nothing
like been one with nature and marvel the
beauty and be blessed we have all these
senses to appreciate it...well written

Loved this Brenda and to me you are that night sky, always brightening my day when we talk. Love ya xx

This is sooooo beautiful, I have no idea how I missed it!!! This is going to my favorites ^_^

Oh that night sky, I love seeing it from where I live now and you my dear are the brightest of them all, hugs you