Gun law (syntuit or senyru)

by Michael   May 21, 2019


If I had a gun
I would load it full of love
and splatter you all

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  • 3 years ago

    by Anthony

    I like how this can be viewed in two ways. It can be light hearted or dark depending on the meaning you assign to it when read.

    Well done

  • 5 years ago

    by Domenico Sottile

    Unfortunately guns are killing love like weed-killers. Out law guns and love will continue to flourish!!

    • 3 years ago

      by Anthony

      Let’s start holding car manufacturers and breweries responsible for all DUI related deaths, since that’s how gun control works. And while we’re at it, let’s disarm the law abiding citizens and keep them from being able to protect their families, since the criminals will definitely start following the law once guns are outlawed. Call me a pessimist if you want but I’m also a home invasion survivor, and let me tell you this; I will send the next soul who dares enter my home unbidden screaming to Hell. I have a wife and three daughters to protect.

  • 5 years ago

    by Star

    Congratulations!! Well deserved full of love win!!

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you STAR :)x

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I am genuinely happy to see a mere sixteen perfectly formed words which say so much scoop the prize, Michael. Well done, this is really is a lovely write.

    Ben

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ben, nice words :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Congratulations!! Do you have to shake that thing so hard and fast?

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Mr D.
      Shaken, not stirred Mish Moneypenny ;)

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