Comments : To Remember

  • 5 years ago

    by Star

    This poems seems simpler than most of your writes, but I’m not saying it’s simple!!! I could feel raw emotions on this which I really like.

    “And sometimes
    a breeze blows the dust away
    for us
    to see things fair again,”
    ^
    Personally, I really love this part. There are too many things in life we have to wipe away the dust from. They have not been thrown away, which means they still have value to us...

    The dust may also mean getting old, right?
    :)

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      It is a very good spin, though every spin is unique to that individual. Even when a poet gets recognized, it means, s/he somehow managed to turn her/his individuation collective.

      About the simplicity, I try to keep my poems really simple, but the concept that I write about are very abstract therefor nor really available to those who do not want to seek beyond the surface.

      Thanks dear Star