Simplest Form of Happiness

by Star   May 27, 2019


The pink string wraps around
her slim arm, while it’s other end
draws a smile upon her face.
It floats midway to the sky, as if
guiding her innocent heart to
a simple ray of happiness.
Her eyes not losing their spark,
although, the balloon sways
and hides the sun.
She reaches her hands up
to grasp an unknown future
that may got lost in this
wide universe.

But she still smiles;
for she finds joy
within the
simplest
things.

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  • 5 years ago

    by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

    The simplest things in life do bring such joy! And I can really feel that in this poem which is why I love it :)

    Beautifully written and expressed :D

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you Lee ^_^

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I do like shape poetry. Your words are right, it's just the spacing of the lines that needs tweaking. Look at my Montgolfier poem. X

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      You are right, I will check it out now. Thank you!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    STAR,
    A nice and gentle piece of writing, expressing in your words how much the simple things in life can be cherished.
    Nicely penned :) M

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you Michael !!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I think it seems 'quite right'. In fact, darn it to hell, it feels so right I may just nominate it! It really is the simple things in life that bring the most pleasure, isn't it?
    By the way, as a side note and it's completely up to you of course, but I can't help wanting to read 'simplest things' at the end there. Or 'simplest OF things'.

    Anyway, take care and stay well,

    Ben

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      And it is always the simple things that we keep ignoring!!!
      Thank you soooo much, I think you like surprising people:)
      I actually added “things” word and took it out couple if time before posting this.
      Thanks again Ben!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Thanks for sharing. Keep on writing.

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank for reading^_^

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