by Ben Pickard
What a truly beautiful ending. We are all beautiful until the very end - perhaps more so than ever then - we are just a different kind of beautiful. Nominated. |
by Brenda
Oh Andrea! I love this! It's TRUE, we look at our aging as negative. Our beloved sees our beauty. Hugs you- |
by Star
About two years ago, Age Spots was the topic for a writing exercise I had. I chose to write a fictional piece. At that time what i wanted and what I was looking for is being creative. After reading this, and finding its beauty. If I would go back I won’t write what I wrote then. Somethings are more beautiful left untouched and embraced!! |
by Mr. Darcy
I do admire cultures that revere their elders. In our culture, it seems, we need love to see what is not skin deep. Beautiful! X |
what a beautiful piece and how very true. In love beauty is always.. Milly x |
by Mr. Darcy
Congratulations, it's so nice to see you on the front page. X |
Aww what a beautiful ending :) |
by silvershoes
Aww this gave me tingles. Growing older is difficult, but having someone who loves you and sees your beauty is a wonderful thing...Not that it's hard to see your beauty, Andrea! You're a vixen. |
Beautiful. Well done on your win x |
by yogi73
This is so lovely and honest. It really expressed inner emotions - which make for the best poems. |
Congratulations on your well earned win with this inspirational piece. Milly x |
by Sive Klaas
wow, " You are so beautiful" well done Maple |