by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald Jun 2, 2019
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Wind howling outside |
Thanku very much Michael.... Appreciate your comment! :) |
by Michael
Such a nice little Haiku Lee :) M |
by Jamie
This is a really nice and simple haiku, but it works well because of the imagery and story told. The three lines line up well and the connect with each other. It is a cold night and you pull your covers close to you, to warm up and you are falling asleep. There is nothing I would change here. |
by Mr. Darcy
Nice imagery here, I can see the restlessness causes by the storm, then finally sleep comes with the help of comforting bedclothes. |
Thank you Michael.. :) and oops shall fix that! :D |
Thank you Jamie!... Your comment means a lot. Glad I am improving and this Haiku has got your approval :D |