by N3MO Jun 20, 2019
category :
Life, society /
about society
~Upside Down~ |
by D.
A more spoken word like piece, this. I think we can all agree with the sentiment behind it too, even if not many are willing to act on their words. The poem itself is more lyrical, and suffers a little with some forced rhyme at the beginning: |
by N3MO
Hey sorry for the really late reply. Found myself back here. Thanks so much for your great critique! I'll definitely try to revise it :D |
by lee
Is there really a reason behind all this mindless consumption? |
by Hellon
I loved the rap sound of this whole verse...you had a very good message here and to put it to rap really made me read right through to the end (I love rap :)). The world is very upside down or I think one sided in many ways and you conveyed that very clearly here...Loved it! |