by Aearion Jul 4, 2019
category :
Friendship, family /
family
When you first came into my life |
by Everlasting
Well, I wouldn’t considered it a complete sonnet. You have the rhyme scheme. You have fourteen lines. However, you are missing the metrical structure and the Volta. Regardless of that, this is a lovely poem. I enjoy it. Sons and daughters are blessings. |