Comments : Formation

  • 5 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Sometimes I feel like you are trying so hard to “rhyme” it that it takes away from the content of the poem. That’s just me though. For all I know, It could just be that I have no clue what you are talking about in the poem. I am disengaged.

    Other than that, it looks to me that the poem is talking about the cycle of life. Birth and death.

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      I did not want to ENGAGE in this one. I just wanted to say my thought and put it out there. It is like a relief, even with no audience.
      Also, this is philosophical, hard to understand, (not everyone is allowed), and seemingly pretentious, but who cars: Doing the right thing very often includes being misunderstood and ridiculed. Poetry actually impowers philosophy, as much as vice-versa. I also did not at all try to rhyme in this one, contingency and consistency are really paradoxical opponents. The meaning made it that way.

  • 5 years ago

    by Everlasting

    By disengaged I meant that I am probably not engaged in the topic rather than the content of the poem was disengaged. Thanks for your explanation. Keep writing how ever you feel like doing so. It feels good to just write.