You never forgot who they were.

by Adastra   Jul 9, 2019


A kind word,
A comforting touch,
Knowing that always, someone would remember-

That you were still you underneath the pain.

It never stopped you from looking for ghosts
In empty clothes.

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  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is me right now...

  • 5 years ago

    by D.

    ‘It never stopped you from looking for ghosts
    In empty clothes.’

    This line carries your poem effectively. This is short but evocative.

    Well done. I hope to see more work from you!

  • 5 years ago

    by ddavidd

    What are the empty cloths: Unwornones??

    "That you were still you underneath the pain"
    outstanding!!

    You are a real deal. Reading the first sentence I realized that in you. I hope you hang around or better, become more active.

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