by ddavidd Jul 12, 2019
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Don't leave her. |
by Sunshine
:] I like the opening statement. I think the command came as a surprising element. Then you made another statement right after (X is not Y) you stated an opinion but you're supporting your belief strongly and further stressing that it goes NO WHERE. The whole piece shows attachment and persistence; as though you are writing for your own self or for someone who you care a lot about. |